Kia ora Peuma! I had a great time listening to your suggested songs. I definitley felt very hyped up after listening to "SICKO MODE". You set this blog post up well. It has a clear title, your caption is grammatically correct and you have given it a label too. Well done. I particularly liked slide number 4 and how you have summarised Travis Scott's thought process.
Next steps: - Always re-read your writing. There are some incorrect words and missing punctuation, that I know you can fix independently. - Elaborate on your ideas. You are capable of giving at least 2 sentence answers, so I would like the see that from now on.
Kia ora Peuma, I enjoyed reading about some of your favourite songs. I like that you put in a picture to go with each one, it made your slides interesting to look at.
Kia ora Peuma! I had a great time listening to your suggested songs. I definitley felt very hyped up after listening to "SICKO MODE". You set this blog post up well. It has a clear title, your caption is grammatically correct and you have given it a label too. Well done. I particularly liked slide number 4 and how you have summarised Travis Scott's thought process.
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- Always re-read your writing. There are some incorrect words and missing punctuation, that I know you can fix independently.
- Elaborate on your ideas. You are capable of giving at least 2 sentence answers, so I would like the see that from now on.
Keep it up! You rock!
Kia ora Peuma, I enjoyed reading about some of your favourite songs. I like that you put in a picture to go with each one, it made your slides interesting to look at.
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