Kia Ora Peuma I really like the design you were going for, I see that this hero who stopped a robbery didn't get a reward or noticed much. I like how T has good leadership to step in and hold the robbers till help arrived. When I watched the video he was really funny and positive with the live news reporter. The next post you do, you should work on getting more words to describe someone. I couldn't really see the words properly , so make sure you choose a font that others can read and not the ones that have style.
Kia Ora Peuma, I like the way you put specific words into the paper because it is very creative. It is very true when you wrote Integrity because I've seen the video and he does have integrity. Also could you use more space to make it more eye catching.Thank you
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ReplyDeleteI really like the design you were going for, I see that this hero who stopped a robbery didn't get a reward or noticed much. I like how T has good leadership to step in and hold the robbers till help arrived. When I watched the video he was really funny and positive with the live news reporter. The next post you do, you should work on getting more words to describe someone. I couldn't really see the words properly , so make sure you choose a font that others can read and not the ones that have style.
Kia Ora Peuma,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put specific words into the paper because it is very creative. It is very true when you wrote Integrity because I've seen the video and he does have integrity. Also could you use more space to make it more eye catching.Thank you