Thursday 15 September 2016
Thursday 8 September 2016
My narrative writing
Once upon a time there was a world with zombies the zombies took over the world but there was one more family the zombies found the family but they went on a big ship and they were safe. One day after they were hungry and thirsty because they had not drunk or eaten for 6 days they looked at the front of the ship.
They saw an island they thought there was people on the island when they got on the island but they did not know they were zombies the zombies attacked them 2 of them died the other 4 quickly ran back to their ship they got away before the zombies ate them.
P2 When they got away from the zombies they looked for land they saw some land this time they were people so they went on the land the family said to the other people “come on to the ship”.
P3 So when they hopped on the ship they started going to find some more land finally they saw land they got on to the land but the land was broken when they went around a house they saw zombies the zombies were going to eat them so they ran and ran from the zombies .
The lesson the people learnt was not to go back to the land again .
Friday 2 September 2016
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