Hi Peuma, it's me Helisa from room nine. I would just like to say that the information you gave me was good. But, next time you should try and write a bit more information about it. The title page was amazing too. The next page was alright but, I think you should just put a bit more effort by changing the font. Other than that it was fine.
Kia Ora Peuma, Mia here from Grey Main School.Your information is very good but next time you could add a bit more and maybe even some pictures. The title page was very bright and colourful, Did you like doing that topic?
Nice presentation Peuma. Next time make sure you put in the learning intention onto the first slide.
ReplyDeletepeuma its awesome i like the way you did it
ReplyDeleteHey Peuma it's me George, and I had finished reading your writing about the birdsong and it was a very interesting writing. So keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Peuma, it's me Helisa from room nine. I would just like to say that the information you gave me was good. But, next time you should try and write a bit more information about it. The title page was amazing too. The next page was alright but, I think you should just put a bit more effort by changing the font. Other than that it was fine.
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Kia Ora Peuma, Mia here from Grey Main School.Your information is very good but next time you could add a bit more and maybe even some pictures. The title page was very bright and colourful, Did you like doing that topic?
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